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Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Sunlight

all is vanity
so said the LORD
(praise me)

men put bitter justified rejections
over sunshine

flaming sword upon a dove

the only shade is a razor sharp
smile

so shine

3 comments:

  1. Some great sounds. I'm guessing its the effect of the alliteration bias? The brevity and alliteration suggest its worth a close reading, and in fact there are a number of interesting readings possible in it (both in tone and content.)

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  2. Actually, no - I've been tinkering with the alliteration bias and it sucks now :( ... i'm going back to the naive form ... most of this post-generation tinkering.

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